Day 12 NaPoWriMo – Dumbing of America

April 12, 2013


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Dumbing of America

Kids need an education
for progression in this nation.
But we reach the realization
that schools cause retardation,
massive mental ulceration,
and left-wing preparation.
They are fed misinformation
with no sign of moderation.
Teachers fight administration
overwhelmed by assimilation.
Drowned by indoctrination
they get no dispensation
just a dose of automation
that results in deprivation.
With no good explanation
why the fortress installation,
like a monstrous malformation,
fills their minds with such frustration,
overloads with provocation.
We the people of this nation
watch our babes reach maturation
with a lack of inspiration
and paper certification,
complete demoralization,
no sense of nationalization,
total lack of Americanization,
full character assassination.


6 Responses to “Day 12 NaPoWriMo – Dumbing of America”

  1. Wow! Great job on all those -tions just like djpr2001 said! You are really a true inspiraTION! Really love it! I hope one day it wil change for all the kids in America.

    • kayuk said

      Thanks! It turned out better than I imagined and TIONS just seemed to flow. There must be a lot of them floating around out there. I felt very ‘Rapper’ when I read it back, LOL!

  2. m33s66vr said

    Without hesitation or trepidation, you write for our considertion… Thank you!

  3. djpr2001 said

    Bravo! I would like this a million times even if I couldn’t see the obvious intellect that could not only voice this but voice it so perfectly, not to mention the freaking WORK of coming up with all those -tions! 🙂

    • kayuk said

      LOL! Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to read it an comment. I had some moments of concern when I wondered if it would ever come together coherently, and then I shifted everything around and there it was! Almost like a puzzle that just put itself together. And, I have to say that I’m inordinately pleased and filled with elation over this one (snicker). When I finished I was surprised at how much it sounds like it should have a rap music background.

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