Day 6 NaPoWriMo – Love, ahhhhh……Love!

April 6, 2013

Broken Heart

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Love, ahhhh…..Love!

Love, ahhh Love–
what wonderous force

that rules a heart
with no remorse.

Chance glance across
a crowded room

starts heart to race
and passions bloom.

The sensuous spike,
the quantum leap,

the catch of breath,
the feel of heat–

it starts mid-way
tween crotch and waist,

the sudden crave
of secrete tastes,

scents too glorious
to describe,

electric shocks
that pulse and vibe.

Only will
controls the fire

that builds inside
and flames desire

to feel the slide
of hardness deep;

bodies rubbing,
sweat-slicked peaks.

Across the room
carefully walk

each step brings
a new assault.

Moist slide here,
lace rub there,

sensation riots.
Step with care!

(fickle tool!)

controls the mind
with iron rule.

One last step….
a moment late,

across the room
I see his date.


7 Responses to “Day 6 NaPoWriMo – Love, ahhhhh……Love!”

  1. Beautifully written. Loved the twist at the end! ❤

  2. Jixi Fox said

    excellent photo choice…:)

  3. floridaborne said

    Sort of been there, done that. One day I’ll tell you about it. 🙂

  4. Rallentanda said

    Love your humour.. With a woman the first glance is not between the crotch and the waist is a lump in throat breathlessness and the heart going thump thump thump! ( sort of like having a heart attack…that’s why Love is really bad for you:)

    Pink gerberas are not a good idea to impress ( just thought I’d let you know:)

    • kayuk said

      Thanks! I try to amuse and surprise when I can. 🙂 Perhaps I should have titled this poem ‘Lust, Ahhhhhh…..Lust’.

      Sorry about the photo, I was in a hurry and couldn’t find hearts that fit the bill… bright red with lightening, the other white outlined in pink with a chain to a second red heart. Where do you go to get things like that??

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